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« Thread Started on Sept 7, 2007, 2:50pm » | |
Well, who's your story characters and how do you make them? 
My chars...
Heroes
Icari
I made him for no reason. I just wanted a better fantasy name than Lunix... not that Lunix isn't horrible when it's moon-related.
I have yet to find the right story for him. Ironicly, I think I'll put him in "The Moon Lord" series. And Lunix is the main character. >_<
Joshua (from Farlorn)
Currently making a short story adapted from the conclusion of Farlorn. I actually made his story role before I named him.  Very uncharacteristic of me. He is a "super-human", in some respects. Because he is as quick as a dragon and as strong as one, too.
His personality? Very wise and reserved for his age. Most preteens don't even tap the surface of his wisdom. O_O
Lunix (From The Moon Lord series)
The only character remotely based on Link. After fitting him in 5 different stories, I came on the perfect one by chance. I'm taking my Zelda fanfic and adapting it into Lunix: Lightfall.
Personality: It varied from each story idea for him. Now, he's your regular orphan who had a okay life taken away from him. Don't forget the rage issues that Silence has. 
Silence/Stephen (From Silence On Fire)
He was the best character I ever came up with. He developed past Joshua. And Farlorn was my first real book idea.
Personality: Lunix was not just based off Link, he's also based off Silence. Stephen uses his rage... and, hulk-like, is suddenly this masterful mage. Best work of mine. I love 'im!
Darren (From The Darren and Eric Sags)
Simply one of my favorites ever since I made him. He's supposed to be a "perfect" gamer. But in the Darren and Eric saga, he facing unheared of challenges. Just to be the best. Talk about ego issues... 
Personality: Some ego issues. Very unusal views of the world. I almost base some of my life on those views.
Nah. You'll wet your pants when you see my villans. They give you nightmares.
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« Reply #1 on Sept 8, 2007, 12:43pm » | |
HEY! my villians are better!!!!!!~
I'll star with my favorite squishy boy Weed ^w^
Weed- dark, spends his timealone or with 'mates' to keep him company. He lives in a small band of others likehim. Right now he is travleing with his mates Fox and Honey and is alowing his brother, Broken and Broken's servant, Charn to stay with him. Broken is Weed's older hyalf-brother. Sence Broken was first born he shuld of taken over leadership of the band after their father died. But instead their father insisted weed become next leader instead
When they where both young, their past place they where living burned down. Broken was seperated from his Brother Weed and there was refief between them. Broken returned tricking Weed into letting him rejoin the band with his sevant Charn to offer as a worker. Weed let them but will soon find out that Broken is ploting a revolt to take back the leader position he 'needs'
also weed is the mastermind of torture ^w^
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« Reply #2 on Sept 9, 2007, 12:40pm » | |
Oh, yeah?
Lord Credin (Farlorn)
I'm not sure whether his father was abusive, or not. Or maybe he was never huggled... Now, he's an insane war-lord. Grew up at Farlorn Castle and dispised the peacefullness of it. Once he built up the castle army enough, he lauched a plan to kill the king. And suceeded...
He actually hates anyone who is weak. They have no skill or purpose. Women especially. And he absolutely dispises children. If he was any more evil or insane, he'd be eating them for breakfast. Well, the wimpy ones. Can't ruin the future army, right?
I can't stop there.
Malkiri (The Moon Lord series)
He has devoted his life to find the Isle of Fate. Sadly, he found it. Sadly, he even ate the ships crew to survive the trip.
Grabbing his prize, which is near god-like power, he killed EVERYBODY in a earthquake and started a new world.
He once had plans to create a world to tourture... but Lunix got in his way before he got around to it.
My most evil?
SR....
But he is reserved for when I am such a writing faliure that I need to write fantasy horror to survive.
*imagines the fact that we'd all die one by one if SR was let loose*
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« Reply #3 on Sept 9, 2007, 4:25pm » | |
oh really? that's your best? MUAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHHAHAHAH!
Add on to Weed: Weed once at his mate's children becuasse they where weak and unworthy to be held to his blood. He also killed one of his mates, Stream bythrowing her into the river with a large stone tied to her front. After he found out Fox was spying on him and working for Broken to help him regain leader of the band, he tied her to the ground, broke her legs, cut off her ears and toes, pulled out her finger nails, and ended up cuting off her head and carrieing it around to remind others in his band to never disobey him.
now we shall go to my favorite baddie.....
Icestorm: A evil charrie i made for 'Warriors'. This evil cat desided that her life in her Clan was boreing and that StarClan and everyone who followed it should be punished. It alll started when she killed her brother after he told her the man she was in love with would only hurt her and leave her heart broken. Soon after she killed the tom she was dating and killed his kits she bared. Then she began aiming fo the hearts of her Clan. She plaied mind tricks on them and evntulay made cats either kill themselves or join her in her slowliy forming army. Once there where enogh followers, Icestorm broke away from her clan, forming the new Clan."RevengeClan." RevengeClan's first order of bussiness was to ensure THunderClan would stay low in size. They kiddnaped apprentices and kits and Icestorm told them the only way they could live was to pleadge their lives to her by killing one of the other kits/apprentices that wee kiddnapped. Soon only four lived to join RevengeClan, leaving icestorm very happy. After many small attracks on ThunderClan to bring them down to size, Icestorm turned her sights on her own Clan, SkyClan. RevengeClan attacked skyclan, leaving few alive to join them. now RevengeClan is still growing, kiddnaping kits andqueens, forcing them to join or to die painfully. Will anyone be ableto kill Icestorm's power?
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« Reply #4 on Sept 10, 2007, 4:15pm » | |
Ok.
I could beat ya'll with SR.
But it really isn't appropriate to talk about him. I mean, really. I was going through a dark phase when I imagined him.
Some extra villan stuff
Lord Credin has a daughter and son. No clue what happend to the wife. Maybe suicide? The son is as insane. But he is insanely stupid... his daughter is less insane, but inherited his military knowledge.
He planed on giving his life to evil when he was 10. Only I know that. Never will meniton that fact in my story. Actually, wasn't my "dark phase" started at that time? I intend to reveal his past if Farlorn does well enough. You have to admit. His past is the most scary about him... I mean, what person wants to kill everybody, bring them to life, eat them (no, wait, Malkiri is the cannabol), and... become something like SR.
Malkiri was a member of a family cult. Which is why he's obsessed with evil. Random fact: Actually was planning on mind-controlling everyone... but changed it to create a new fantasy world.
Now, SR? Don't make me....
 Fine.
Experiment SR146 was a catastrophe. I mean, man should have know that crearting a fully real fantasy world wasn't that easy. So, dark magic piled up, Shadowripper was created.
Then, knowing that if SR could travel from one world to another, scientists now must create a path for SR to travel that is away from earth. The more worlds are made, the margin of error increases. Leading to an epic ending...
That's just the story. The character kills. Literally.
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« Reply #5 on Sept 10, 2007, 8:21pm » | |
HA! I've seen bunnies eviler! (nah j/k^w^)
When icestorm was born her mother knew that her path would only cloud in darkness. She had given birth to two kits outside of camp in the midle of winter. Icestorm's mother told her mate who found her near death that there was only one kit who lived, even though she knew that Icestorm's new born body lay only a few feet away, burriedin snow. After Her mother died, her father tied rushing back to camp, carring Icestorm's brother, when he triped on something and son found out that it was his mate's other kit. He took both back, dispite the dark glare Icestorm had given him as he picked her up. the glarelasted only a second, yet it could price the heart of even the clamest of people.
When Icestorm got older she found out from an elder that her mother died and the medicine expert found that she must of died giving birth to her. Icestorm becuase curssed with the burden that becuase of her, her mother was now dead and lost from her view. Icestorm was so madshe nearly beat he brother to death. After that, she found out her brother,who was named Dockpaw, fell in love with her worst enemy at the time. Icestorm tried to tell her brother why she didn't want him to go with her but yet Dockpaw ignored her.
Icestorm was so angry that she tortured Dockpaw's crush secretly until she promised to never fall in love with him, or tell a soul what had hapened just then. Tortures Icestorm inculded was, slowly cutting her sides and pouring salf and other acids into her open wounds, forceingher eye lids open and poking them roughly with a dull butter knife like thing, ect.
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« Reply #6 on Sept 11, 2007, 3:19pm » | |
My most recent villan is "Apathi" from The Illudain Movement. The Illudain Movement is my deepest, darkest story yet. Compleat with overtones of sane insanity (explanation: Thinking some thing smart that is insane), and high emotion. Yay emotion! I wouls be nothing without including emotion powered by good word choices.
Apathi
Well, he's apathetic. Doesn't care about anything except himself. Samuel created the Illudain and wrote stories about them facing the Dark Arts. Arnold asked his rich father to start a corporation called "DarkArts", and when this evil boy moved away to a different town, he grew his own little cult movement.
His evil is only inspired by his love for what Samuel has written about the DA and it's leader. But who knew he'd go crazy with it?
Yeah, he is inspired by Petep Wiggin from Ender's Game. Peter was 100% A+ murderer. Apathi shall follow the same path by the end of the book's 2 year storyline. Power-hunger, a story, no understanding of "being a good boy", and a love for killing that suprises him. I mean, I was even shocked when Bobby gave his life to protect Sam from Apathi's wrath. Why, oh why?
Side note: Kills Bobby in a mad attempt to end the Illudain by assasinating Samuel. Failed because he couldn't do it after killing Bobby...
Side Note #2: The Illudain Movement is somewhat inspired by Ender's Game by Orson Scott Card. Also inspired by my own personal wars.
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